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The slow road service arrived. A man in a black suit emerged from the dusty vehicle with AAA written on the side door. George began to sweat. 8775 Flat tire? 8776 the man asked. 8775 Y-y-yes 8776 George managed to blurt out. He looked over to Harriet. She began to reach for the glove compartment when the man pulled out a gun and shot her in the head. George barely had time to react when the man put a bullet through him as well. The couple melted into a purple goo. 8775 Goddamn alien scum 8776 the man exclaimed as he hopped back into his truck. He put in a CD. Highway to the dangerzone blasted through the speakers as he sped away.
Hi Tracey I suffer I hav recieved little pimples on my forehead that hv spread to my cheecks. I took anifungals and probiotics thinking it might be acne caused by candida cause I was in antibiotics some months I decided to go on orratane its been two weeks candida acne not react to this miracle drug ?
This is a powerful story. I like the emotional weight it has. You do have a lot of telling here, although I don 8767 t particularly blame you for not getting it. The post wouldn 8767 t have helped you with all of this telling. Let me break it down:
[ ] To get a clue in to why you 8767 re having acne, I recommend starting with Chinese face maping. There are tons of articles out there about this subject. I found this article interesting Where Your Acne Is And What It Looks Like Can Tell You What’s Causing It [ ]
Question: Not everyone with acne seems to respond to antibiotics. Does it mean that my skin problems don 8767 t stem from diet, allergies etc., but mainly from bacteria overgrowth? Is there anything other than antibiotics that one can do?
8775 Well, it 8767 s beautiful, right? But, like, why was it built? Why here, when you know, all that stuff. 8776
I think you are trying to say something to the effect: drop the authorial authority and replace it with interiority and mush. This s d t rule seems to end in something samey, tedious and, worst, celebratory-of-the-human-condition (American version). No wonder there are so many near-identical novels turning up.
Thanks for your answer, Tracy!
I def. don 8767 t consider longtime antibiotics for my acne. It 8767 s just so frustrating: I 8767 ve tried everything from diet to face care to these stupid CLO capsules!! 😀 Nothing has worked longterm. No doctor, no homeopath could do anything. Sometimes (when my skin is not that bad) I think I 8767 m at peace with the fact that I will never have absolutely clear skin. But when it 8767 s getting worse like right now, I 8767 m like, I am 75 years old, will this godd*amn acne haunt me till I 8767 m hitting menopause?? Not fair.
I always thought that maybe cheeks were related to hidden food allergies because I know it 8767 s not like everyone who has cheek allergies smokes or has something wrong with their lungs!
Also, you can start later if what happens at that later point makes it clear what has happened before. That allows more space to insert the important details. For example, you could start right off with, 8775 The flight was delayed because of the snow, so Tanya and James stayed another night and decided to see The Cats again. 8776 The reader already knows from this sentence that the couple traveled and that they 8767 ve already seen the play once. If the good stuff in this story happens in the couple 8767 s conversation after seeing the play a second time, this might be an even better place to start.